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You are the frosting on my cake.
She said this whenever the windshield grew littered with insects --
those glowing, traveling bodies meant to be born and splash across my view.

You're so weird,
I replied.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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LOL

Ok..we REALLY went north/south with this one..
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That poem should have been called "Reaching, searching, straining ... FAILING!" *laughs*

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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ok - this was funny too!
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