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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-05-17 11:43 PM



one minute she was there
her laughter his favorite sound
The fragrance that she left
was all that he had found

he looked for her everywhere
her eyes taunted his wakeful hours
he stocked the fridge with favorite wine
filled the house with her favorite flowers

years passed, he found her not
he grew old and sad in time
he died, never knowing that she
ended up in a deVine's simple rhyme

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-05-17 11:44 PM


Awwww..... that was sweet and eloquent. You've got talent to spare, miss deVine

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2002-05-17 11:45 PM


I don't think I can spare ANYTHING in this race!
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
3 posted 2002-05-18 12:17 PM


no, you have PLENTY of talent... this was soft, sweet, and so deliciously deVine
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4 posted 2002-05-18 05:16 AM


I guess I left toosoon and missed the races *s

M
this was very nice

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