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The fragrance that she left
gave my candles light.
The fragrance that she left
straightened out my roads.
The fragrance that she left
fed me spoon to mouth.
The fragrance that she left
swelled my empty throat.
The fragrance that she left
calendared my days.
The fragrance that she left
commanded thick my nights.
The fragrance that she left
crushed roses to the page.
The fragrance that she left
is all that I have left.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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1 posted 05-17-2002 11:45 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sigh....you're too fast for me!!!!!!!!

I should have thought of repeating a line.
bsquirrel
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2 posted 05-17-2002 11:46 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Remember, speed has nothing to do with quality -- as is evident with my posts tonight. LOL But ah'm enjoyin' this, ah must say. MORE PEOPLE COME OVER!!!! Sheesh.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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3 posted 05-18-2002 12:15 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

diggin this - went kinda the same way... the repetition worked well!
Duncan
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4 posted 05-18-2002 01:34 AM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

Very cool.
bsquirrel
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5 posted 05-18-2002 03:16 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

I thank y'. *bows*

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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6 posted 05-20-2002 12:54 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

I love it! So this was an off the top of the head kind of splurt on the page then, huh? I like the way you think, squirrely poet.. Sounds like you guys had fun - noooo I always log on at different times! ^_^

Love,
Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

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It was all Sharon's fault! Okay, and some of mine. But mostly hers!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

 
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