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three moons rose over obsidian peaks
as Mondonal rises from his throne and speaks
green light, eerily shadows his face
he turns, watching her come to him in grace

her head bowed in reverence to him
her King, her husband after this night
a small sigh escapes her lips
this marriage was not a delight

lover forgotten, her hand passed over
she would be Queen in just an hour
her husband, her King growled deeply
taking her into his power.

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1 posted 05-17-2002 11:36 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Ooo ... I feel like this is a rough insight into yr immortal women work. I love this!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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I might take it further..but my Immortal Women kill their lovers, they don't marry them.
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Nah, ah realize tha' -- ah just mean, maybe the immortal women come in and dismantle the kingdom? I dunno -- jus' an idea.

I love it, whatever y' do with i'.

She said burn ... together.
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ah - but remember, there's a rebel in every bunch!
 
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