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I searched for God in a box of Fruit Loops --
since life is sweet cereal circles,
it follows that God would answer me.

Following that logic, I bought a raincoat
and stepped outside to January frost.
It wasn't long before my face turned red.
It wasn't long until I learned the cost.

I searched for God in a box of Fruit Loops --
now I'm searching for His decoder ring.
I here the Buddah has some answers,
and I need to believe in him, or anything.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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1 posted 05-17-2002 11:10 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine


Oh this is VERY deep....you may not think so but I find it is..
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Why thank you, PdV. I'm not sure what t' think of it, but ah'm glad y' enjoyed it.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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"and I need to believe in him, or anything."

The last line sounds lonely.. Heh, I'm not sure if that's what you were thinking when you wrote it, but it's what I feel from it.. perhaps because it is a familiar sentiment..


Luv, Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

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4 posted 05-24-2002 12:19 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Believe me, Lynne, that was more just ... babbling than poetry on my part. But it was a fun li'l nothin' write. Glad y' enjoyed.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

 
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