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bsquirrel
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0 posted 05-17-2002 09:00 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bsquirrel


Okay, this is with nothing previous in my head, no idea what I'm going to write about AAANNNND four minutes before I drive home from work. So let's see what I'm good for ...

Let me have your light,
my midnight.
Let me have your shape,
my shoreline.
Let me have your mouth,
my river.
You can have my arrow
and quiver.
Hmm.... not much is it? I'll try to do better when I log in again later.

Mikey

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 05-17-2002 09:02 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

No it's pretty good..borders on Adult..a slip of the tongue and you'd be moved!! LOL
nakdthoughts
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I wouldn't say it's not much..that quivering arrow kind of  got to me ..*s
oops that was  arrow and quiver wasn't it  my mistake bsq

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bsquirrel
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3 posted 05-17-2002 11:58 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Glad to make y' smile, Maureen.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Yu Lan
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heh, hail bsquirrel.. ^_^ This is brilliant, what a cleverly naughty mind you have... .. erhm.. ..

-Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

bsquirrel
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5 posted 05-20-2002 01:40 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Heh heh. Yes, glad to have you in my army (hail bsquirrel). Cute, Lynne. I appreciate yr comments.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

 
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