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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


0 posted 05-17-2002 08:40 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nakdthoughts



I can make you come to me,
can tease you into will,
undress me with your eyes of thought
make heartbeat quicken, still.

I turn to you with silent voice,
my hazel eyes in bloom.
There is no use, you've had me caught
in never ending gloom.

I could send you pictures
that would entertain your mind.
But isn't real the better deal
to touch the tender find?

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 05-17-2002 08:47 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wow!! Off the top of your head is good stuff!! Like cream rising to the top...
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 05-17-2002 08:50 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

well if I continued more I would have had to put it in adult *s
bsquirrel
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3 posted 05-18-2002 12:04 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Please do continue....

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


4 posted 05-18-2002 12:08 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

keep going...
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 05-18-2002 05:35 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I guess I pooped out too early and missed all the fun.

*s

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Yu Lan
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6 posted 05-20-2002 12:49 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

I like it. Well, my best friend thinks there are some things better imagined than seen or said.. I say I agree

One question. I must have missed something as I don't pop in here as often as I would like - has a challenge been offered, or something? Everyone seems to be writing 'in answer to' poems..??? Just um.. wondering.. I'm not even sure if it's the right question, hehe...

Love,
Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 05-20-2002 06:14 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

last week Devine left a message  on Family dialogue that on Friday Nights  it would be Open Mic night in the Haven and to  join in after 8...sort of spontaneous writing...*s

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Yu Lan
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8 posted 06-01-2002 06:24 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

aaaahh. Thanks

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

Local Parasite
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9 posted 11-23-2002 01:43 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Honestly, I think the poem itself is a bit taunting in its tone.  Cutting it off like that really does "make heartbeat quicken, still."

You've managed to make this rather erotic, and you've used absolutely none of the buzz words that seem to be so popular in mild erotic poetry.  Know what that means?  Means you're actually good at it.  

Lovely write.  Thanks for entertaining my mind.

Parasite

Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.
~Aldous Huxley

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 11-23-2002 05:36 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I am glad I could entertain, this was  fun that night..one after the other small poems to taunt and tease...
You flatter me but I will accept it
thank you LP
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