How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Sanctuary
 Poetic Haven
 Loss of Trust
 1 2 3 4
Follow us on Facebook

 Moderated by: Poet deVine, Martie   (Admins )

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Loss of Trust

 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 05-26-99
Posts 25869
Hurricane Alley


0 posted 05-17-2002 08:07 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine


Shocked at the trust betrayed
I stood alone as my body swayed
dry mouthed I heard the story
felt lies smudge upon this glory

a lie isn't a blade
but cuts much deeper
into the heart

a lie turns around
and slaps your face
tearing your soul apart
© Copyright 2002 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
NapalmsConstantlyConfused
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 05-15-2001
Posts 960


1 posted 05-17-2002 08:36 PM       View Profile for NapalmsConstantlyConfused   Email NapalmsConstantlyConfused   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NapalmsConstantlyConfused

ooooo, ouch.
that just SOUNDS like it hurt.

want a cup of coffee? it'll help...
-Dave
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 10-29-2000
Posts 19275
Between the Lines


2 posted 05-17-2002 08:41 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

a lie turns around
and slaps your face

certainly like that line *s

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-17-2002 08:58 PM).]

Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 05-26-99
Posts 25869
Hurricane Alley


3 posted 05-17-2002 08:49 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

There is a true story behind this ... it was my day at work. A lesson was learned, I can tell you that. And my trustful nature just took 17 steps BACK.
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 10-29-2000
Posts 19275
Between the Lines


4 posted 05-17-2002 08:59 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I still have trouble with my trusting nature...it gets me into trouble wayyyy too often..
M
 
 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Sanctuary >> Poetic Haven >> Loss of Trust Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors