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Nan
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0 posted 2002-05-01 12:05 PM



We Held Your Hand
                  

We hearkened to resounds of heaven’s whispering
Your name, beheld in countenance of sovereign Grace.
We held your hand until we heard the angels sing

In harmonies melodic as the spawn of spring,
Extolling visions of a hallowed time and place.
We hearkened to resounds of heaven’s whispering

A song so sweet, our yearning hearts envisioning
Your dancing blithefully about celestial space.
We held your hand until we heard the angels sing

Songs of release from burdens earthly trek may bring,
Our visions with the stars to see your joyous face.
We hearkened to resounds of heaven’s whispering.

Bequeathing now our hold to end all suffering,
For mortal days so surely wrought in steadfast pace.
We held your hand until we heard the angels sing

One hand in ours, one touched upon seraphic wing,
Our grasp released to bind ethereal embrace.
We hearkened to resounds of heaven’s whispering;
We held your hand until we heard the angels sing.


(In loving memory of my father - C. Leonard Carlson - 1/4/23-4/23/02)
by Nancy Carlson Ness



[This message has been edited by Nan (05-01-2002 06:50 AM).]

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CocoBaci
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1 posted 2002-05-01 12:18 PM


Nan, this poem/tribute2your daddy brought me2tears...
My goodness, each verse just moved me beyond words...
Beautiful expression PoetFriend...
And I thank you4sharing it...
Hugs2u...
*~coco~*

Dee
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2 posted 2002-05-01 04:16 AM


Nan, my heart goes out to you. You and yours will be in my prayers.

Dee

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3 posted 2002-05-01 05:40 AM


Well done, my friend. Welcome back....
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4 posted 2002-05-01 03:54 PM


I put my comments in the workshop but you know how I feel Nan, and my heart goes out to you all.  Well done on this poem and I am sure the family respected your reading it as well.
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5 posted 2002-05-01 04:46 PM


Oh nan...you write of something I still can't think about...love and prayers with you this day. May comfort be yours.
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6 posted 2002-05-01 08:21 PM


Beautiful Nan. Your heart shows here. A very loving tribute. I'm so sorry for your loss, it's hard to lose a parent no matter how old we are at the time.
JP
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7 posted 2002-05-02 07:12 PM


My sincerest condolences on your loss, dear friend, and my utmost gratitude to you for blessing us with this masterful tribute.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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8 posted 2002-05-17 04:13 PM


A beautiful poem dear friend. Hey, you guys are holding back on me...I didn't even know this place was on here
Nan
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9 posted 2002-05-19 09:11 AM


Thank you, dear friends...

hoot - Glad you found it - It's a secret hideout...

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10 posted 2008-02-06 02:10 PM


A truly wonderful poem!!!!
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