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JP
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Fluffy cloud, fluffy cloud.
Why do you scream your hate so loud?

Gentle rain, gentle rain.
Why spear innocence with searing pain?

Silken breeze, silken breeze.
Why cause loving hearts to freeze?

Why is peace not shatterproof?
Nor harmony, indestructible?


  - hey, who knows where this came from... just started with fluffy cloud -
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1 posted 05-01-2002 03:36 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Only you can see right through the fluff of the clouds to see what lies within, dear one...
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Okies..fluffly clouds...I dunno..seems kind of silly, but still you could write about mud, and I would love it!

enjoyed!

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Yu Lan
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3 posted 05-02-2002 03:57 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

Yep, they say the best poems start with a fluffy cloud.. Actually, they don't.. BUT that's irelevant, because they should. hehe

Luv, Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

JP
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4 posted 05-02-2002 07:09 PM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

Y'all are just too darn nice!

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

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5 posted 05-03-2002 12:18 PM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kaile

i refuse to turn cynical by your morbid readings into fluffy clouds...

hmmm, if peace is shatterproof, we probably won't treasure it as much...hence peace comes with its vulnerabilities just so we won't take it for granted?
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