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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA 
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Fluffy cloud, fluffy cloud. Why do you scream your hate so loud? Gentle rain, gentle rain. Why spear innocence with searing pain? Silken breeze, silken breeze. Why cause loving hearts to freeze? Why is peace not shatterproof? Nor harmony, indestructible? - hey, who knows where this came from... just started with fluffy cloud  - |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Only you can see right through the fluff of the clouds to see what lies within, dear one...  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Okies..fluffly clouds...I dunno..seems kind of silly, but still you could write about mud, and I would love it!  enjoyed! How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Yep, they say the best poems start with a fluffy cloud..  Actually, they don't.. BUT that's irelevant, because they should. heheLuv, Lynne It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Y'all are just too darn nice! Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i refuse to turn cynical by your morbid readings into fluffy clouds... hmmm, if peace is shatterproof, we probably won't treasure it as much...hence peace comes with its vulnerabilities just so we won't take it for granted? |
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