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Professor Gloom
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of Depression


0 posted 04-16-2002 10:04 AM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

Let us walk in the shadows of the day,
Slow in pace in the cool along the way,
Let us pause as we go taking time light
Let us stroll all the day till we reach the night.
Let us see the sunset fall behind the hills
Slow the night will huddle us with chills
As the spring flower close till the morrow
Let us walk in the night of shadow.
Let us hold each other in walking
And quiet will speak when not talking,
Let us walk with no place we need go,
Let us pause gathering things grown slow.
Slow the day will return to the sky
Let us go without the asking why,
Slow in pace in the warm along the way
Let us walk together through the day.

Gloom

© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
JP
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Loomis, CA


1 posted 04-16-2002 04:19 PM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

I'm liking this... will take me about 20 more reads to know exactly what's getting to me... I'll write more when I have the details...

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


2 posted 04-16-2002 09:19 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Hey there! You write beautifully. I like this side of you.

Course the other side is good too....just different.
Professor Gloom
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3 posted 04-17-2002 07:19 AM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

Thank you, JP,
Although I didn’t think it quite that deep,
I am pleased you liked it enough to consider a reread.

Thank you, Poet deVine,
Some have said both sides of me are “different”,
Glad you enjoyed this one.

Gloom
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4 posted 04-19-2002 11:23 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Yes, Let's. sigh...for all of my frantic mania, this is what I am lacking these days.
Hmmm...blackberries are getting ripe, too!

An excellent idea! Thanks.
Yu Lan
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5 posted 05-08-2002 02:25 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

"Slow the night will huddle us with chills"

Beautiful

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

JP
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6 posted 05-09-2002 07:02 PM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

Like ogres and onions, poetry has layers....

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

miscellanea
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OH


7 posted 01-13-2005 04:25 PM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

I like the tempo... You used just the right words and sounds to achieve perfection in imagery and developing the mood.  

Bravo!
           misc
LoveBug
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8 posted 01-20-2005 08:02 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Such beautiful images, and a much more beautiful meaning behind it all. If we could only slow down, walk with our loved partner, and take in everything like this poem describes. After a long university day, this poem calmed me very much. Thank you.

Oh, make me Thine forever
And should I fainting be
Lord, let me never ever
Outlive my love for Thee

iliana
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9 posted 02-09-2005 01:12 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Very lovely writing, Professor Gloom.   ....jo
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10 posted 09-30-2006 10:31 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Yes, indeed....and when I've had too much of light but far too much of darkness, gloom is just about right.

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