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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2002-02-15 10:05 PM

In the field of writers dreams
foraging as one upon your power
all lined up tail to nose
bleating out each hour

The herd swells as a wave
upon your shepherd’s hill
an ocean’s white horizon
ever constant, never still

Once among this yearning throng
I sought approval from your praise
til I was reflected in your eyes
and was cured of this malaise

You are merely mortal I think
no man on earth will I revere
I smile as wiles of sycophant
adulate into your ear

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

1 posted 2002-02-15 11:58 PM

Woohoo!! You go girl! Oh man...PDV? This rocked! Excellent message to those peoples who either create the harems or who willingly participate thinking to curry favor. Especially liked the sycophant usage. Hope those remaining bootlickers like the taste of shinolah.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2002-02-16 10:18 PM

Yup..well said, Lady..
I love it.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2002-02-28 08:46 PM

wow...

and, if you build it? he will come...

sorry it took ME so long to get here, but you know me...sigh, I LIKE detours, had to stop and see the world's largest ball of string! grin? and I don't even wanna discuss the snake farm!

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2002-03-03 09:05 AM

He has built it... and they have come... and it is as awesome as he...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2002-03-08 02:44 PM

I must concur with those opinions above. . .but, have one question. . . who will ease his pain???

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2002-03-09 08:42 AM

5,000 Passionate Poets...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2002-03-22 09:18 AM

PoetdeVine~
I think I may just enjoy this
above all else I am to read this day~
Thank you~

LOL @ Serenity ... she thinks SHE'S slow to follow the bread crumbs ! ! (or was that string ?)
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (03-22-2002 09:22 AM).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-04-02 02:42 PM

Very interesting write...

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

9 posted 2002-04-19 08:34 PM

Yep.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

10 posted 2002-05-17 04:14 PM

WOW!!! You tell them girl!

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