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Poet deVine
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In the field of writers dreams
foraging as one upon your power
all lined up tail to nose
bleating out each hour

The herd swells as a wave
upon your shepherd’s hill
an ocean’s white horizon
ever constant, never still

Once among this yearning throng
I sought approval from your praise
til I was reflected in your eyes
and was cured of this malaise

You are merely mortal I think
no man on earth will I revere
I smile as wiles of sycophant
adulate into your ear
© Copyright 2002 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Alicat
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1 posted 02-15-2002 11:58 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Woohoo!! You go girl! Oh man...PDV? This rocked! Excellent message to those peoples who either create the harems or who willingly participate thinking to curry favor. Especially liked the sycophant usage. Hope those remaining bootlickers like the taste of shinolah.

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2 posted 02-16-2002 10:18 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Yup..well said, Lady..
I love it.

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

serenity blaze
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3 posted 02-28-2002 08:46 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

wow...

and, if you build it? he will come...

sorry it took ME so long to get here, but you know me...sigh, I LIKE detours, had to stop and see the world's largest ball of string! grin? and I don't even wanna discuss the snake farm!

Nan
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He has built it... and they have come... and it is as awesome as he...
Sven
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5 posted 03-08-2002 02:44 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I must concur with those opinions above. . .but, have one question. . . who will ease his pain???

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nan
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6 posted 03-09-2002 08:42 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

5,000 Passionate Poets...
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 03-22-2002 09:18 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

PoetdeVine~
I think I may just enjoy this
above all else I am to read this day~
Thank you~

LOL @ Serenity ... she thinks SHE'S slow to follow the bread crumbs ! ! (or was that string ?)
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (03-22-2002 09:22 AM).]

Sunshine
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Very interesting write...
JP
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9 posted 04-19-2002 08:34 PM       View Profile for JP   Email JP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JP's Home Page   View IP for JP

Yep.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 05-17-2002 04:14 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

WOW!!! You tell them girl!
 
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