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Alicat
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0 posted 02-15-2002 01:45 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

Who is that stranger there, for I have no clue?
But he's the one who showed me how to love,
Walking around with his head in the clouds
Though his hands were buried inside white gloves.

Everyday I would see him right there,
Telling me to think without my head.
'Let love unfold, let it grow and surround you.'
But he never showed inside he was dead.

Where has he gone with his little wan smile,
With perfect soul hidden from detection?
In his good time I know we'll meet again
Each time I look at my own reflection.

Alicat
© Copyright 2002 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Munda
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1 posted 02-15-2002 05:22 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Sigh... somehow your poems always leave me pondering. Great job Alicat!
Poet deVine
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2 posted 02-15-2002 06:54 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very good poem with some GREAT advice!
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3 posted 02-15-2002 09:43 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Seems to be a searching poem but I know I'm understating it.  This grabs me for a reason I can't explain.  Enjoyed this, Kitten!

For all who watch.Dare you say hello? Come in and ask the questions that are on your mind, but spare me your judgement until you truly sipped of me.

 
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