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Poet deVine
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Luminescent and sublime
love glows in her eyes
fragrant and forgiving
seeking loverís sighs.

Radiant is her love for him
shining for all to see
She breathes her life just for him
without guile or duplicity.

The touch of her hand has healed
his once scarred, wretched heart
The warmth of her love gives him
a haven - a place to start.

For you, yes, YOU. You know who you are.
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1 posted 12-18-2001 11:47 PM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

Aw, ain't that sweet, you wrote a poem for me...
Enjoyed reading, PdV, the first verse especially..
Luv
Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

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2 posted 12-19-2001 10:06 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

ah....mysteries...hmmmm...

Well I know this ain't about ME...grin, I'm hardly a "safe haven"!!!!

It's a lovely poem--luminescant and sublime...I love that!

NOW WHO???? grin..

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Whoever it is heís a lucky man.
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Thank you for reading this. "Lucky?" LOL I think he'd be a fool to feel lucky to have me!!
 
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