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serenity blaze
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0 posted 12-17-2001 05:25 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Two, side-by-side,
the left one, hollow.
Disease 'pon limb--
death sure to follow.

The right one, strong,
Healthy and tall.
Lightning strikes.
The mighty, falls.


(repost from Open....#10 methinks)

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1 posted 12-17-2001 12:48 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sometimes you never know what's going to happen...at first I thought this was you and me..and then I realized that one of us would have been struck with lightening and I changed my view quick!!!

I dodge lightening bolts for a living!    
Irish Rose
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2 posted 12-17-2001 02:06 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

I can relate to this for personal reasons, the poem really moved me.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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3 posted 12-17-2001 08:20 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


serenity-
   Very cool metaphor, my friend.
   Wonderful!
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Yu Lan
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4 posted 12-18-2001 11:56 PM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

This one gave me a cold, sad feeling.. it feels like a lonely poem to me..
I like it.. well written
Lotsa luv,
Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

 
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