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Poet deVine
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Tis just a glance
a flickering
a smile in gleam of eye
a sigh so soft
itís often missed
unheard by passerby

What measure can I take
of words for this
attraction
this list will grow
will gain length
in poetic distraction

Tis not just one thing
one moment
that holds me to your side
but count them?
I cannot
for surely I have tried
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1 posted 12-15-2001 08:45 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

What measure can I take
of words for this
attraction
this list will grow
will gain length
in poetic distraction
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Careful now Ms Divine ... some one might mistake you for a moth   *L*
You know I LOVE this one....very cool poem...
nothing like a pretty blue flame to inspire us  

Its not like you to say sorry,
I was waitin on a different story.
This time I'm mistaken ...
for handing you a heart worth breaking.

Nickleback

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2 posted 12-15-2001 11:26 PM       View Profile for Krawdad   Email Krawdad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krawdad

Ooooh, I like this, I like this!
"Tis just a glance"
Elegantly understated!
And there is something else that I can't quite but my finger on, but enjoying it whatever it is.
Will read this many times I'm sure.
Thank you, PdV

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3 posted 12-16-2001 10:01 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Laughing at JM here...perhaps we should start a club? U.M.---United Moths?

Your heart is gently earnest Sharon...and very evident in sincerity.

Now, anybody gotta light?  
 
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