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Munda
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0 posted 09-01-2001 05:22 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Written by special request with a special "thank you" to Nan for editing.

Soul Mates

Forever and a day, our love will thrive
Together we shall walk the path of life
Enwrapped in pure white petals of a rose
Eternal winds sing songs of sweet repose
Two hearts, beating as one - one mind - one soul
Our kindred spirits - love's greatest symbol
As one to each we are life's symphony
From dawn of time, we're - soul mates - you and me

We share a gently guiding holding hand
O'er trembling earth, or quagmire of quicksand
We'll climb as one each mountainside too steep
Supporting too when valleys are too deep
We'll cry together single truest tear
One from within that cleanses every fear
We'll laugh the laughter of soul's harlequin
Remain ourselves, yet spirits lost akin
We'll show the world love's value found anew
And love each other as true lovers do
On solid rock of love we'll build our home
As two - yet one - we'll never be alone
Enchanting melody; life's symphony
Soul mates we are - forever - you and me

Munda
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1 posted 09-01-2001 07:15 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Wow, I really thought this was a nice poem. If only I had the inspiration (a person) to write it about. Well done on this one.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Martie
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2 posted 09-02-2001 04:41 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Munda--A beautiful poem about the best kind of love.  
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 09-02-2001 10:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Munda~
Very nicely done.
Good to see you visiting the friendship circle -
~*Marge*~

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A lovely and rare love.  Well written.  Joyce
Munda
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5 posted 09-09-2001 05:48 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Thanks guys for your kind replies. I'll tell you though it's not my forte to write a poem for people I don't know, howeverI loved the challenge to try. (And succeed of course.   )

Thank you for taking the time to read and reply.  
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6 posted 09-10-2001 01:17 PM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Munda, this is a most amazing piece. Some of the imagery in this is simply breathtaking. You have awoken a creative juice in me I had long forgot about. Thanks for doing that.  

I did enjoy this read for the beauty and honesty it gave. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.  

~AF~

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7 posted 10-02-2001 06:24 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

My heart just dropped on the floor  

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

 
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