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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 07-24-2001 05:16 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

I cannot trust you poet site
After all youíre only bites
And if you were to go and crash
All my poems in the trash

I cannot trust you floppy disk
To save my poems is a risk
For if you melt in the heat
All my poems incomplete

I cannot trust you memo pad
If it rained youíd be glad
To smear the words I once wrote
Or maybe eaten by a goat

I cannot trust you feeble mind
All my poems you canít find
So maybe Iíll just keep on writing
Canít trust its good, I got bad lighting

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-25-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-25-2001 01:59 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Walt~
You simply crack me up ! !  
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 07-25-2001 09:56 AM       View Profile for Decaflame   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Decaflame


ROTF....this is a wonderful read, Walt...
chasing rain
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3 posted 07-25-2001 12:08 PM       View Profile for chasing rain   Email chasing rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chasing rain

LOL!!! Cute and funny.   I liked how you spelled "paranoia" <--is THAT even right?

-haeL

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

Martie
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4 posted 07-25-2001 05:31 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Walt--I know just what you mean...funny but sort of true too.  Loved the poem!
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5 posted 07-25-2001 06:17 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Nicely done here! I thought this was really great walt! Awesome job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Yu Lan
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6 posted 08-11-2001 04:49 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

heh, yep, the man of the holy YUH returns with another brilliant tickler of the funny bone.. lol.. enjoyed muchly Walt.
Lynne

ďOne word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..Ē

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 08-11-2001 11:59 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

ROFL ... much enjoyed this Walt!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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8 posted 08-11-2001 10:21 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

All this is so true.  I like this.  Sometimes I find a poem of mine tha I haven't seen for awhile and I don't even recognize it as my own.  Oh for a computer brain.  Joyce
Yu Lan
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9 posted 08-12-2001 07:03 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

Oi, I replied to this yesterday! That's not fair, my comment disappeared.   Anyway, i loved this Walt.. a read deserving of a big grin  
Lynne
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10 posted 08-12-2001 02:38 PM       View Profile for rosepetals25   Email rosepetals25   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rosepetals25

Wayoutwalt,

   I like this walt You brought a chuckle to my lips

TaraB

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