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Paula Finn
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0 posted 06-20-2001 07:18 AM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paula Finn

Hopes scattered pieces
Impervious to the pain
Caused by the shatter
© Copyright 2001 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 06-20-2001 04:51 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Hey You---welcome to the sanctuary!!!! gotta love it..slow here, but civil, yanno? lol...Maybe we can get a party in here...byoP? dancing for joy..love your haikus, lady...let's boogie woogie now!  
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Ouch.....this one was pretty sad...
I enjoyed it though. Very well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 06-20-2001 10:28 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

Paula your haiku is so deep. Hope is what some live on and when it's taken away they lose all feelings.
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4 posted 06-21-2001 05:33 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

Very nice.  This one's deep.. very sad.  I liked this.  Beautiful haiku.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

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Oh yeah, I do know this feeling. Very well done.
Sandra
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Wow - so deep and haunting! I understand this feeling all too well. Into my library this goes~

Take care,
Melissa~
 
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