Hey, neat Jamie! one question.. is this one poem? Or seperate haiku? I think perhaps, it could work either way, not sure they seem terribly related though.. (well, or wondurfully, lol.. whichever) Nice read..
“One word can be magical. Imagine then, the effect of several words, together..”
Yu Lan-- They are all related in that they are about roses----The second Haiku is a continuation of the first, and makes no sense without it..(the pigmentation for a blue rose not existing..hence the offer of lavender)-- .. the angel face rose is very low growing, thus you have to bend way down to enjoy it's fragrance.... thanks for reading and asking..
There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. byron