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Elizabeth
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0 posted 05-10-2001 10:18 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Each one of us has had a broken heart
Each one of us has shed the scalding tears
That fall when our true loves from us do part
And no one's there to calm our pains and fears.
With torn and battered soul, we day to day
Attempt to piece our heart back once again-
Love's lessons we have learned the hardest way
And now we live with searing pain within.
How can we give our broken heart to love
When only pain is given back to us?
Where is our gentle angel from above
Where is the one who always will love us?
The pain of lost love never seems to leave
And broken hearts forever seem to grieve.
© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 05-10-2001 11:25 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

This was very good, Elizabeth.  You write with a wisdom that stretches beyond your years.  You have captured and feelings very well.  Great write.

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2 posted 05-11-2001 12:26 PM       View Profile for banburycross   Email banburycross   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for banburycross

your words are so beautiful and you really convey a feeling of sadness yo the reader with this.  this is wonderful, thanks for posting this.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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3 posted 05-13-2001 02:45 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Yes, they do forever grieve.....until they are mended of course.
Well done!!
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4 posted 05-18-2001 08:36 AM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Elizabeth, I can relate to this sooo well! Like you say, we've all had our hearts broken and they never completely heal, do they? Great piece here, thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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5 posted 05-19-2001 12:08 AM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

Sadly true...beautifully written!
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You are very right my friend....I think that every time our hearts are broken, they loose a little piece of what they once were...thanks for writing such a wise and beautiful piece.  Well done!  

*Krista Knutson*

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If Heaven's here on Earth..." ~Tracy Chapman

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7 posted 05-21-2001 02:41 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Thanks to everyone who replied for your wonderful comments. Glad you all enjoyed!  
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wow!...i really loved this poem...the flow the emotions...everything i felted and related to...awesome poem...thanks for sharing it  

i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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Elizabeth
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Thanks Albert, and yes I am addicted to Passions (re: your sig   ).
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10 posted 06-14-2001 07:33 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

I simply LOVE it Elizabeth
keep it up  

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Mic

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Nicely written.. but sad!

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

 
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