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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 05-08-2001 01:06 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

I am sad about the little cat
I think Iím gonna cry
For you see I have a cat like that
No wait one day she died

I said this too good PDV
Who too was sad for cat
Who lived its life for four cat years
As blind as yucky bat

She offered me an ICQ
Version of embrace
But all I could envision
Was a kitty licking face

Her warmth she extended
And I got a fuzzy feeling
Not as fuzzy as little cat
That thought sent me reeling

Then I began to relate
I was shedding tears no lie
Shedding like a little cat
Oh then I had to cry

Donít cry brave walt
The poet touched your soul
Write to her or him and say
The little cat has made you whole

Send the poet an email
Thatís what you should really do
Iíll send the dog in, out goes the cat
Yakkity yak and boo hoo

The poem that made me sad
ďShe was just a little catĒ
Warmed me so I thank a friend
For giving a needful chat

To the poet who wrote it
A newcomer at P.I.P
The little cat purrs and plays
So our hearts can be set free


She was just a little cat by: Titia Geertman

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 05-08-2001).]

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Mother_Earth
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1 posted 05-08-2001 11:26 AM       View Profile for Mother_Earth   Email Mother_Earth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mother_Earth

Walt, I think you have sliped over the edge.  Maybe a hair ball?  But, both were good poems.  ME
Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 05-08-2001 08:46 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Walt, you are just a bit nuts.  Was it me, or was there a light-hearted tone to the poem?  
You sadist you.     Kitties are nice.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.††Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.††
~Unknown

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3 posted 05-09-2001 07:38 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

You are nuts!!!! LOL

This was good....and I promise not to mention that you were crying your eyes out as you read Titia's poem!!!
Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 05-09-2001 08:20 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Sad Tita.  Funny Walt.   Joyce
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5 posted 05-13-2001 02:34 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

*italian accent* Forget about it!
You're crazy walt man, you're crazy!

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