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serenity blaze
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0 posted 04-15-2001 01:51 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

a beckoning--
so I surmised
come hither
with one wink of eye
the chance to dance
with love again
awakening
was just the end
of the sin
that held my hope
the sun aloft
a glimpse of smoke
notice of
the death of pope;
now, my heart's dear vatican
yearns to sleep - to dream again.
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1 posted 04-15-2001 02:21 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

and when it awakens. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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I enjoyed this very much! Written well.
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3 posted 04-17-2001 12:34 AM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

Nicely written poem here!  I liked this a lot    Very wonderful.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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Very nice job Serenity.  This is simply outstanding, I love how it is put together.  The fragmented sense of the format adds to the actual emotion in it.  
Good job!
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
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i really liked..
the way u have written this poem!
jus awesome...
keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

 
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