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Allan Riverwood
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0 posted 04-13-2001 04:57 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Take my hand and walk
We shall see the light ahead
Through our dampened eyes
© Copyright 2001 Brian James Lee - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 04-13-2001 08:04 PM       View Profile for Child of the Stars   Email Child of the Stars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Child of the Stars

  Bravo, bravo bravo!!! Beautiful words, simply marvelous. Arrivederci!  
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Great job..haven't seen a senryu in a while.
Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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Alan...this form escapes me as does the other minimalist forms....always amazed at how much can be conveyed in so few words! Applause and admiration from me to you!
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I don't know why, but senyrus always amaze me.. maybe because I can't seem to put them together right.. hrm..
Anyway, this is a beautiful written senryu!  Very nice job  

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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awesome!!
much enjoyed by me
keep writing..allan

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nice...especially liked "dampened eyes"
 
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