I'm a little confused now as to what the tanka form is, as I've seen so many different versions of it, lol.. So.. um.. what is it? I think I'm getting it mixed up with a cinquain.
I'm not sure this would be one of your best Allan, there is nothing particularly WRONG with it, it's not bad, but it hasn't quite got that.. grab, that a lot of your poetry does..
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