St. Paul, MN
This is gorgeous, my dear. Alive with the beauty that your words seldom fail to create. I loved lines like
"Kisses whisper upon my skin
As do your words upon my mind..." and
"I am absent from this world
And at the same time living...pulsing
Within your eyes"
Those lines are so perfect... I've been there before and you paint out the feeling exquisitely. Wonderful writing, love
P.S. You made me get my dictionary with the word "melliflous"
"And every state of mind, left to itself, every shutting up of the creature within the dungeon of its own mind - is, in the end, Hell" - C.S. Lewis