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serenity blaze
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0 posted 02-16-2001 02:36 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

He said,
with you?
it's just a game
a test to
love you anyway
and I replied,
it's not the same?

Is it not so
with everyone?
I am not the only one...
are you not here
pleasing me?
you want me
to whisper your name...

and he looked down
at his notes
I told him
that was but scapegoat
avoidance
of the me in me...

He signed the chart
and set me free...

I grinned.
He signed.
Reluctantly...

(repost from Corner Pub)


" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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1 posted 02-16-2001 03:47 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

when you flirt with your shrink, they call it "transference".... you've just inspired me... lol... huh? what's that you say? you WEREN'T flirting with him? er her? awww geez, i'm so very confused.... let me ask you this, does EVERYBODY who talks to you take notes? i know i do... lol... but that's just my little parade... i take notes about everything about everything but only those who say significant stuff get paraphrased....

did your shrink paraphrase you, btw? what does this poem MEAN? do you have a mirror i can look in so i can figure out if i'm really here.? do you have ANY idea what i'm talking about?

no?

ahhhh well... don't feel bad, neither do i, but i dig your poem, miss
Andrew Scott
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2 posted 02-16-2001 05:28 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Need shrink!
Me think
To the Stute you go.

Doc Moose
Turn screw loose
You'll never feel low

White walls
Padded halls
Dipped in purity

Stop by
Say "Hi"
Find Serenity

And best of all, he doesn't take notes.

Andrew Scott
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Ruler of the Stute East Wing
& Royal Rooster
Poet deVine
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3 posted 02-16-2001 06:34 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I saw a shrink once...oh, sorry that was my ex husband....sigh!
Dopey Dope
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4 posted 02-18-2001 01:05 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Nicely said here!!
I liked this one!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
Yu Lan
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5 posted 02-19-2001 02:18 AM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

Hehe, probably if I went to see one, I would not be let off so lightly.. Well said.. enjoyed muchly. ^^


Luv,
Lynne

"He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu
Severn
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6 posted 02-19-2001 04:31 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Me likes..

like the dialogue format...

K - did you get my email? I'm having trouble with mine at the moment...

hugs

fellow K
Martie
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7 posted 02-19-2001 10:05 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Oh...so now I understand...hmmm, my X husband was, hmmm is, a shrink...and all that time I thought he loved me...and here it was only 13 years of therepy. Enjoyed your poem.
Irish Rose
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8 posted 02-20-2001 04:49 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Do what I do,,,,,find a woman shrink!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

serenity blaze
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9 posted 02-21-2001 09:34 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Want to thank you all...and doreen...good gawd, I sure hope no one's taking notes...sigh! But this was my humorous spin on the end of what was supposed to be "couple's counseling"...grin...thanks again, all!

" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot

 
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