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Irish Rose
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0 posted 02-13-2001 02:13 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Irish Rose

I feel threads between the spaces
you can’t see them but they’re there.
They join together places
of your life that need repair.

They hold the beads together
when they're falling, falling free.
and string the rainy weather
in a peace and harmony.

Now, I could call them prisms
for their sheen reflects a smile;
and we're touched with newer visions
when they tarry for awhile.

Pray for showers in your wilderness
exhilarating streams;
They will bring a sense of wholeness
to our separated dreams.

When you feel these threads or prisms, should you call them by that name,
just stand and know that they will warm you in the falling rain.


"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis






[This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-13-2001).]
© Copyright 2001 Kathleen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-13-2001 06:09 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Kathleen~

Just beautiful! I loved this and will be back when I think of a 'real' reply, but just know that I think this is great.
Irish Rose
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Elizabeth, there is nothing wrong with your reply, It feels good to have the feedback, it's dry here in my heart! Thank you.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis


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3 posted 02-14-2001 10:09 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Excellent poem! I loved the rhythm and the theme.
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4 posted 02-15-2001 02:20 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Me gusto mucho!!!
You write very well!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
Irish Rose
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5 posted 02-15-2001 03:06 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Sharon, thank you!

Dopey Dope: eso es muy agradable de usted decir a señor

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and the sun drips honey."
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6 posted 02-15-2001 09:30 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

This was fabulous. The images are inspiring to me. Very well done.

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