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The Gift of Lunacy

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 02-07-2001 10:56 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

Outside your window
a present from me to you.
Bathe in light tonight.


*my most appropriate respost  *
© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-08-2001 11:03 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

heheheh it took a cupple reads but yuh i got it hehehehhehe
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2 posted 02-08-2001 04:54 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lovely!
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3 posted 02-08-2001 05:03 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Full moon?  Loved it!
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4 posted 02-08-2001 06:24 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Rats! I thought I already had this gift. Then I read the poem......lovely poem.  
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5 posted 02-08-2001 07:11 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Nicely done!!!



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6 posted 02-10-2001 04:20 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Serenity
Uh-Oh ... I thought it was for Doreen !
I'm glad I opened it !

Know what ???
This is just soooooo appropriate ! LOL !
Tee-Hee !
~*Marge*~


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7 posted 04-28-2001 09:10 PM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

ah yep.. ^^ Yep.. yep.. I'm just going to keep saying yep, 'coz I'm not sure what to reply.. Enjoyed reading this.. ^^ Well done. (Yep)

-Lynne

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What a beautiful present!  

Maree
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9 posted 12-20-2001 02:03 AM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Hey, am I missing something?  Who's the gift to?  Must be something from back when it was actually posted...

Well, this senryu (I say senryu because the most basic theme of the poem is human relation, despite the nature image) is very sweet... I like the use of an imperative sentence as the last line.

Nice work...

~Allan
 
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