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Sunshine
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0 posted 02-05-2001 05:51 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine



in soft of night's light
lips meet in tenderest touch
he loves me that much
© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-05-2001 06:06 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This is so beautifully romantic.
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2 posted 02-05-2001 10:54 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Karilea:

and with three lines
you say so much
of love
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3 posted 02-06-2001 08:41 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Now this is one form I've never tried, how did you do this and so marvelous!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis


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4 posted 02-06-2001 12:01 PM       View Profile for Gene   Email Gene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Gene's Home Page   View IP for Gene

Sunshine came softly
through my window this morning;
I loved it that much.

Gene
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swift morn with sunlight
dancing on your shoulder now
sunbeams laughing song
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6 posted 02-06-2001 02:42 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Very nicely done!!! I thought the senryu was VERY sweet. I loved it.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
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night meets morn again
soft sunlight pledges love then
greetings, midnight, come
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SunShine, very nice senryu and the last line is so warming.  

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9 posted 02-07-2001 03:15 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Parker...thank you...

eventide brings forth
hidden thoughts kept from day's sun
of love, of just, one...


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 02-07-2001).]
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I'm loving this... all of it!  
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Munda, thank you...

soft the sun swift, sets
orange blazing red blazing fire
sets forth all desire
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12 posted 02-23-2001 10:41 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

awwwww...that is so romantic


So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.
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13 posted 02-24-2001 12:01 AM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Beautifully written. Soft and sweet.
 
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