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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-02-04 07:18 AM


Where? Oh, there?
he is my love...
where?
He is my only one
my heart beats
to release of dove
wait for me
  my only one...
a simple life
a dream awaits
I am wife
a finger waits
for but a tuppence
ring of gold
and saviour
the grail in bold-
simple tale
of love in pale
and every grain
of sand I hold...

and every tide
will come undone
each castle blown
unto the sun...
and all that is
is all that was...
he is, he is,
my only one...


" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot





[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 02-04-2001).]

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2001-02-04 11:25 AM



This has a sing song quality that is very pleasing. I hope you find him and if you do, could you see if he has a brother for me?  

Martie
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2 posted 2001-02-04 12:01 PM


Serenity--

"and every tide
will come undone
each castle blown
unto the sun...
and all that is
is all that was...
he is, he is,
my only one"

Star light, star bright
I wish I may I wish I might
I wish your dream come true tonight


Elizabeth
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3 posted 2001-02-04 12:04 PM


I like this....keep looking.
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2001-02-04 04:18 PM


Funny ME...I DID sing this yanno...was just a little wish...and psst? IT WORKED TOO...

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-02-04 07:40 PM


Very sweet here. Glad to have read this one!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-02-05 11:23 AM


Serenity....this is so very pretty....it likes me a whole bunch....and I needed something sweet to read....thank you!
Irish Rose
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7 posted 2001-02-05 01:34 PM


This read like an beautiful braid of words and fell over my ears in soft tones!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis




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8 posted 2001-02-09 10:36 PM


wow!!! now that is really good

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Poet deVine
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9 posted 2001-02-09 10:41 PM


serenity, I think you need to give us some lessons..I'd like MINE to work sometimes too!  
Tequilia_Sunrise
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10 posted 2004-07-08 12:32 PM


very beautifull
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