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Poet deVine
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Like a mountain, we began
seeking our lovers crest
Yes there were valleys too
but we rose to meet each test

Without you life was a desert
my soul was dry and forlorn
I sought a mountain stream
hoping our love would be reborn

Then we found our hearts
in the forest of despair
Lovers lost in lies
we stumbled without care

The horizon now before us
yours east, mine is west
We part our landscapes here
we’ve failed the lover’s test.
© Copyright 2001 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 02-03-2001 07:58 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

man sniff yuh

You know the "Never Ending Story"?
They're still telling it!

Poet deVine
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Thanks Walt..here's a tissue..now BLOW! LOL
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Awwwwww this was real sad. I'm sorry. Very nice poem though!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
CocoBaci
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4 posted 02-04-2001 12:32 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

A touching write PDV and I thank you for the enjoyed read

You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win...
Martie
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Sharon--very well done...and so true of many relationships...a sad fact.
Irish Rose
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6 posted 02-05-2001 01:38 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

Oh, I hate to fail....and in love? aghhhhh

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis


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woman sniff...yes.  and sigh...walt, can I borrow that hankie? Oh. Nevermind.

Graceful and sad...

" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot

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This is really sad Sharon

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.
Lone Wolf
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Failing sucks. Just no fun at all in it.
WhtDove
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Anyone have a clean hanky?

Romy
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Very sad poem, but maybe somebody else is waiting in the west...just over the horizon?
 
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