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Elizabeth
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0 posted 02-01-2001 11:32 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

(This is a repost.)

The bleakest day, with clouds of gray,
In me I feel a chill.
The winter sky it seems to cry
No sun doth shine, nor will.

Hate's seed is sown, I am alone
I scream and reach for you
You are not there, for they don't care
There anger is so true.

I want to fight, though it's not right,
I only try to hide
No feelings showw-they must not know
I'll keep it all inside.

10-99


Just see how virtue repays you, you turn and someone betrays you
Betray him first, and the game's reversed...
-from The Scarlet Pimpernel

© Copyright 2001 Elizabeth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-01-2001 11:45 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Sadly beautiful. You shouldn't hide you know...eventually someone finds you...
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2 posted 02-01-2001 11:54 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

A poet can never hide their feelings, especally a poet that writes as beautifully as you! Thanks for sharing!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav


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3 posted 02-02-2001 12:10 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Elizabeth--I have felt this way before...it is lonely...you have expressed it well.
Elizabeth
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4 posted 02-02-2001 12:12 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

awww, does this mean I've been discovered already?  

Thanks all....but I've learned that sometimes it's for the best to try to mask the feelings...especially when you aren't supposed to have them in the first place.

Just see how virtue repays you, you turn and someone betrays you
Betray him first, and the game's reversed...
-from The Scarlet Pimpernel

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Elizabeth, isn't it frustrating...we cannot even hide in this, our sanctuary...anguished words they might be, still you write beautiful poetry...
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6 posted 02-02-2001 09:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Well written, Elizabeth! Yep, I agree, sometimes we just have to hide some of our feelings.
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7 posted 02-03-2001 11:46 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Wowness......very well written! I really enjoyed this read.



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8 posted 02-04-2001 12:36 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Elizabeth, your poem today seemed to just reach out and grab hold of me...
I thank you for this read...
~coco~


You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win...
Elizabeth
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Thanks to everyone who read this...

Just see how virtue repays you, you turn and someone betrays you
Betray him first, and the game's reversed...
-from The Scarlet Pimpernel

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Elizabeth, thankyou for letting us read it  

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11 posted 02-09-2001 10:39 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

simply magnificent.....thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


 
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