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Loving Each Day (Repost- First Acrostic)

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0 posted 02-01-2001 10:22 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LoveBug

Not the best thing to grace the pages of the Poetic Haven, but I had to make some kind of contribution on this historic day!

Longing for the sun to rise
Over the soft green hills
Views stir and that touch my soul
I still look and get chills
Nothing ever could make me
Give up this glorious day I see

Each day is a gift from God
Veiled by sorrow, but beautiful still
Every day I rise
Ringing tears from my eyes
Yonder daylight… I long to feel

Dawn will come to us each day
And each morn, with gratefulness I pray
Yearning to feel all days to come


"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav


© Copyright 2001 Erica N. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-01-2001 10:49 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

And you've chosen beautiful sentiments to post first here. Love this Erica.
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2 posted 02-01-2001 11:07 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I love it! I have yet to master an acrostic, so my hat is off to you.

Elizabeth
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Erica--Each day is a new beginning...this is a beautiful poem..and well done acrostic.
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4 posted 02-03-2001 11:37 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

*german accent* very interesting......
hehe I liked this one!



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I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
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Lovebug,
Your acrostic is beautiful...
A smooth read with gentleness of expression...
I enjoyed
~coco~


You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win...

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 02-04-2001).]
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This doesn't read like a first try at all.  You did really good on this one.  Maybe I should try this style one of these days too  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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7 posted 04-22-2001 10:51 AM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Awesome job, Erica!  I really like this one loads!  You rock girl!  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
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