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Andrew Scott
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25 posted 03-02-2001 07:05 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Roses are red
My dog is blue
He drank from the toilet
Now has a green hue.


You figure out the color scheme.
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26 posted 03-02-2001 07:50 PM       View Profile for the romantic fanatic   Email the romantic fanatic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the romantic fanatic

My, my, doesn't this style seem familiar. I wonder why? Interesting, short, and well, um, yeah I guess it's okay. Hee-hee. "Don't write much"? Who are you trying to kid?

D-mon


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27 posted 04-27-2001 01:52 AM       View Profile for anonymous albert ?   Email anonymous albert ?   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymous albert ?

hehehe...i liked this one..
cute..keep writing

...?

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28 posted 04-27-2001 09:30 AM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

I prefer Elizabeth's version.     This was good but it could do with a revision, the rhyme scheme was defied in the last line.  
Nice work, nonetheless.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
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29 posted 04-27-2001 06:25 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Chris, have you been to Hawaii lately.. or do you just enjoy beautiful girly flowers around yourself?

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30 posted 04-27-2001 06:28 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Chris is a flower child!
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too much information Chris, though I must ask do you flush it first before taking a drink? sorry just curious.

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

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Uh erhm bleh umm... yeeep..  
Ohmygosh. well. THAT was unexpected! good onya Chris, everyone should have a hobby, even if if DOES involve drinking out of the toilet..  
Yeah I like this.. it's a keeper..

-LC
 
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