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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-02-14 02:02 AM



I Will Not Be Denied


Heart ache, sadness
Loves pain brings madness
reflection, introspection
caused by inspection

Whats wrong with this picture
the wallpaper doesn't match the fictures
like words must match deeds
or confusion is all it seeds

growth from both
but not together it was done
finding bridges to connect
with out more pain from either one

My love for you in continual growth
I need to see the real you come forth
I will not be denied, again
The oportunity for US too finally begin

By
Connie McDonald
Copyright@2001
June 11 20014:50PM

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-02-14 02:11 AM


*sigh* and you should not be denied...BRAVO!!! A wonderfully romantic poem...I love it... **big hugs** HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Siofra
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2 posted 2002-02-14 02:19 AM


I know someone who I wish were saying this about me..or had said it a long time ago. Could you go back in times before and give it to them? I love this.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Zinsser
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3 posted 2002-02-14 09:08 AM


Thank You both for responding.... Glad I was able to touch you with this...
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