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desperado
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0 posted 2002-02-14 01:38 AM


I give this to my valentine,
whom I love beyond doubt, or reason
I give this gift to you,
my heart to hold through every season
you make me happy just thinking of you
like sunlight through a cloudy day
you make me smile so easily
even when you have nothing to say
your fingers are electric
and they set my skin to charge
the way it makes my mind so clear
it makes the smallest thing seem large
you right me when I'm twisted
and point me to the coast
I love the way you laugh and sing
and yes, the way you make my toast
the simple things you do for me
when the day is old and gone
the way you sleep so soundly
when I rise before the dawn
how I love the days we layed in bed
snuggled deep beneath the covers
talking about our future and dreams
as friends and yes as lovers
so much to say about you
so few ways it can be said
get some sleep tonight my angel
and place your halo by the bed
if you wake up in the morning
and I'm no where to be found
don't be alarmed or worried
it's to your heart I'm eternally bound

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

© Copyright 2002 James Webster - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-02-14 01:42 AM


*giggling with delight* I am sure her face will light with a smile of love as she reads this wonderful and heartfelt poem...Romantic and perfect for Valentine's day....HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO YOU BOTH **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Siofra
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2 posted 2002-02-14 02:21 AM


Then, Sir..that is all that needs to be said. Lovely Valentines poem.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Midnitesun
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3 posted 2002-02-14 02:37 AM


"I love the way you laugh and sing
and yes, the way you make my toast"
LOL, that is a classic! And a beautiful love poem. Congratulations!   +

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2002-02-14 08:21 AM


Absolutely beautiful!
Dulcinea
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5 posted 2002-02-14 08:24 AM


Awwww...a beautiful heart felt tribute! How sweet! Lucky lady!

HAPPY VALENTINE’S DAY!

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6 posted 2002-02-14 01:19 PM


Awww she will absolutely adore this!
Beautiful, sincere emotions! Happy Valentines Day to you and her

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2002-02-16 01:07 PM


Enjoyed this...James
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