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Marsha
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0 posted 2002-02-14 12:36 PM


I Have Nothing To Give
For My Valentine

I have nothing to give you except this fire
A fire that burns bright feeding desire
A flame that flares into incandescent heat
With each pulse and every single heart beat
Take from me this endlessly burning flame
Fall into fire that drives you insane
I have nothing to give except heart’s fire
Accept the gift of love wrapped in desire

I have nothing to give you except love’s kiss
A kiss that is burning in desire’s bliss
Taste the fire that runs between you and me
It’s liquid heat bubbling passionately
Take from me this gift that I offer to you
Now feel love’s flame as it consumes you too
I have nothing to give except heart’s own kiss
Accept the gift of love wrapped in this

I have nothing to give you except this flame
A flame that burns hotter than any the same
Bathe in the fire that flows from within me
Let it fill and know you intimately
Take from me this heat feel it growing so much
Draw it in you and feel its fire's touch
I have nothing to give except heart’s own flame
Accept the gift of love wrapped in heats name

Marsha



To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79

[This message has been edited by Marsha (02-14-2002 10:45 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2002-02-14 12:40 PM


MAGNIFICENT...WHAT YOU OFFER IS THE PRICELESS GIFT OF HEARTFELT LOVE AND DESIRE...THAT IS A RARE TREASURE AND YOU HAVE PENNED IT PERFECTLY...HE WILL LOVE THE PASSION IN THIS POEM...**big hugs**HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY, MARSHA...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-02-14 12:43 PM


I think you definitely have SOMETHING to give him, Marsha...and he should probably handle it with oven mitts.
Beautiful...absolutely beautiful work!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

RosePetal
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3 posted 2002-02-14 12:47 PM


your love is the best thing u could ever give! make sure he is worthy of you dear girl happy valentines day
Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-02-14 12:48 PM


MARSHA, I'LL TAKE IT!
((Marsha))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-02-14 01:01 AM


Mushy,
That and a teddy...you don't look empty handed to me. Excellent write and well as to images...hmmmm.

monique
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6 posted 2002-02-14 01:04 AM


When i saw the title it scared me i thought it would be a sad poem. Surprise! It is flammable.     monique
Dee
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7 posted 2002-02-14 06:24 PM


Marsha, I am sure your 'nothing' was eagerly accepted. Love this.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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