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Larry C
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My PIPs Valentine
By Larry Chadwick



I remember when I was in grade school,
Giving Valentines to all, that was the rule.
As I recall it was my first time to rhyme,
And worked so hard to get them done on time.

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
You have a nose,
Like a B52!

It was fun to do and made me laugh so hard,
I really thought that I was quite a card.
Of course I only did for the ones that I adored,
And I’ll it now again I hope you aren’t abhorred.

Roses are red, because I blush thinking of you,
Violets are blue, I hope you feel the same too.
You have a heart, that is the sweetest thing,
That remains true, it makes me want to sing!

So in the spirit of the rules on which I was raised,
Here is my Valentine to all I want to give praise:
Roses are red and so are LngJhnAg, Nan, and Magnus,
Madame Chipmunk, sodpossum and Elizabeth Santos.

Violets are blue and so are JamesMichael, Tiersdin and Startime,
Along with catalinamoon, Silver Streak, peaches and Sunshine.
But then again so are Dr.Moose1, Martie, Suetang and Kethry,
Besides Mistletoe Angel, strbbux, Irish Rose and brianbeaudry.

You have a heart (maybe mine) SEA, rwood, Greeneyes and chrissy,
Including doreen peri, pandora, RosePetal and Mushy.
And sicne he’s willing to pucker up, maybe Duncan too,
Wayoutwalt for informing me that Sy’s a guy too.

There are so many it boggles my mind,
I haven’t been here for that long of a time.
But Bill Charles and Midnitesun as well,
Vandana, Fee and N orth Carolina Girl are pray tell.

I should stop I can’t help myself don’t gag,
Ecrivan, Mistletoe Angel and LngJhnAg.
Irish Rose, briandbeaudry and Silver Streak,
rebekah33, Martie this could take a week!

And a special verse for Balladeer,
Who knows how long poems are in here.
They never and probably this won't either,
For are my screw ups are just a teaser!

I left out one of the best of all,
Not from neglect buy bad recall.
BluesSerenade who is the best,
And friendship I've put to the test.

And to those not mentioned here in this poem,
It is not from neglect but no more room.
And I don’t dare forget to mention pandora,
Because dear friend, I know who you are!

February 13, 2002


[This message has been edited by Larry C (02-14-2002 02:59 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-13 11:22 PM


you had me cracking up with that b52 nose LOL!! you are so funny honey!

awwww and you mentioned me in your poem..thank you larry
You are such a sweet heart, tell me,
how many valentines do you have?

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2 posted 2002-02-13 11:24 PM


Larry,

     This is so cute!  You once again made me laugh so hard my sides hurt..

"Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
You have a nose,
Like a B52!"

     LOL!! I hope you have a very love filled Valentine's Day   

Hugs
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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3 posted 2002-02-13 11:26 PM


.......Larry doesn't love me

(kidding)
this was so cute Larry, I bet you had lots of fun with this!

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4 posted 2002-02-13 11:27 PM


RosePetal,
That is classified information. But...since you twisted my arm: MY WIFE, my daughter, my mother, my daughter-in-law and my other daughter-in-law, (three) sisters-in-law, my niece, my niece-in-laws, all my PIPs sweeties and oh yes, my mother-in-law. Whew! Now you went and wore me out. LOL

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5 posted 2002-02-13 11:28 PM




BRAVO!!! Ooohhhhhh...I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssssss) This is soooooooo beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always make me smile! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2002-02-13 11:29 PM


Larry~

I think you have a piece of everyones heart here, including mine.... you have a way of making people smile....


Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 11:29 PM).]

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7 posted 2002-02-13 11:31 PM


Tara,
Really? Cool and is was my first poem! Thanks.

SEA what you can see!
This may call for some serious over correction. Look again...please.

Noah,
I am glad you found this! Thanks.

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8 posted 2002-02-13 11:32 PM


Lauren,
It seems we made a trade! Thanks.

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9 posted 2002-02-13 11:36 PM


Thanks for coloring me red, Larry...Its my favorite color!
I love the little rhyme you wrote in grade school....My mother always told me that I had a big nose, so you could have sent that to me and I would probably have believed you.
Thanks for sharing this cute one with us.

I know that isn't a B 52, but at least its red.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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10 posted 2002-02-13 11:45 PM


So leave me out....who cares? I'll send you a valentine anyway...with specific instructions about what to do with it!!
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11 posted 2002-02-13 11:55 PM


Oh thanks I needed that,
now I feel special!!  NOT  
Just kidding, kind of.
Cute poem Larry!
I hope you have a happy day!

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12 posted 2002-02-13 11:57 PM


LOL @ Balladeer.  Hey Larry, thanks for putting me in the room with all the girls!  Though, I'm taken now and won't be puckering up for ya, anymore.
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13 posted 2002-02-14 12:00 PM


ROTFLMAO at Balladeer. LC, did you realize you wrote Mistletoes and Long John twice? You love them twice as much as me?
Way to go bro. OMG, I think you also put Irish and Brian in there twice! Balladeer must really be fuming!

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-14-2002 12:01 AM).]

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happy valentine's day, my friend

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15 posted 2002-02-14 12:37 PM


Lyra,
You're amazing! Everytime you have the graphic. Cool and thanks.  

Balladeer,
Geesh...one screw up after another. I get all those girls on my mind ahem anyway you got your own verse as you are worthy and more!

Lori,
Well sweetie, you're special in my eyes!

Duncan,
It was a long shot but worth the risk! ROTFLMAO

Midnitesun,
I'm so confused! I have too many Valentines...but I'll take my chances. And to answer your question, nope.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (02-14-2002 12:43 AM).]

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16 posted 2002-02-14 12:44 PM


dor,
Here kitty...kitty. Had to be good! LOL

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17 posted 2002-02-14 01:02 AM



Aw, shucks, Larry....

Ya shouldn't have..
.
.
.(but I so glad ya did! Happy VD!)

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18 posted 2002-02-14 01:03 AM


Balladeer,
Isn't Happy VD an oximoron?! Egg on my face...but nothing new and your welcome!

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19 posted 2002-02-14 01:14 AM


I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO YOU AND YOUR LADY....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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20 posted 2002-02-14 01:18 AM


Karen,
And all the same to you. Thanks.

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21 posted 2002-02-14 03:08 AM


Oh, Larry you truely have made me smile,
Never change because we love you the way you are.
Happy Valentines to you my friend.

Hugs, Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

Larry C
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22 posted 2002-02-14 08:57 AM


Fee,
Bless you and you made mine!

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23 posted 2002-02-14 11:32 AM


okeyyy...so, i'm no where in picture & now i'm ...but enjoyed the early show of talents with B52....Happy Valentines Larry dear...
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24 posted 2002-02-14 11:53 AM


This was fun, Larry.
Thanks.
Roses are red, and I am blue
but you are a cutie, you make me smile too.
Sandra

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25 posted 2002-02-14 12:04 PM


Sandra,
Cool. Thank you so much!

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