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poeticdreamer
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0 posted 2002-02-13 10:43 PM


Dream shattered into twinkling illegible pieces:
Imagined hours over within the confines of a blissful yawn,
Yet for me it was real as any unreality could be,
Ghostly thoughts gently tapping on a sleeping mind

She stood there with beautiful face I could not make out,
Still I felt comforted by pin cushioned brain numbness,
Loving someone I never met and surely never will,
For surely a blurred vision could not embrace me.

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State of Suspended Passion
1 posted 2002-02-13 11:44 PM


I find something familiar in this although I'm not sure what. Reminds me of a dream I had last night. enjoyed

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

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