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Searching (Triolet - an attempt)
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Searching (Triolet - an attempt) |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
With eyes full of hope, she tries to look Deep into his eyes to discern the truth To reach into his heart, every niche & nook With eyes full of hope, she tries to look For the love she felt, or, so she mistook All that she found in her bloom of youth With eyes full of hope, she tries to look Deep into his eyes to discern the truth. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent, amigo!  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
amigo, Balladeer is right. You did excellent!  (Of course, he was right even if I didn't say he was right. But he won't mind a second opinion.) |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Michael dear...thank you so much, your words make me  with joy...thank you, Sir... Larry dear...thank you, your words send me  this beautiful morn.... |
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