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Valentine's Day Challenge
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Valentine's Day Challenge |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What I Really Want for Valentine's Day Other poets write of passion and flaming tongues of fire of heated embraces caught in the throes of desperate desire What I want from you dear is something quite unique a moment of loving quiet with the soulmate that I seek To place my palm upon your heart to feel the beating beneath my hand to sigh in breath that you will feel as together we humbly stand Eyes locked in shared compassion this is the closeness I desire a simple touch upon your heart is all that I require  |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
How very peaceful and serene. Like listening to waves on an unpopulated beach, watching birds fly in the sky, or listening to river noises, at night staring at stars. No! More like holding hands with God. How wonderful. May God grant you your Valentine's day wish. ((Poet deVine)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-13-2002 07:21 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, to look deep into a lovers eyes and tell them how you feel as you admire their beauty is the most romantic feeling of all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
PDV, this is simple and very, very sweet. You managed yet again to bring a soft smile to my lips, and captured my feelings on the subject. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Have to agree with Newell, this has a serene, contented feel to it. Great job on meeting the challenge! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sharon, this is great. Hope you have a happy day. Sandra |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sharon, I really like this. A nice simple meaningful message.. and sweet to boot I enjoyed.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think we are looking for the same thing. I echo the praises and leave a quiet smile in understanding. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sharon~ Very loving indeed, I hope you have a great day....with many peaceful smiles.... Lauren~ Step through the barrier of my mind, enter my soul, feel my desire, let my eyes guide you into the shadows of my heart [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 11:32 PM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
PdV, Does that make you easy to please? Very touching and more! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this sounds delightful. I hope you get what your heart desires |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for you kind comments. I wrote this for someone special. I hope he reads it!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm sure that he did. . .  great job deVine. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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