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Open Poetry #18

Whisper (a senryu)

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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0 posted 2002-02-13 06:05 PM

Whisper

Your love touches me
Like a soft whisper floating
On an autumn breeze.

~*~

Kiss

The brush of your lips
Warm and soft against my own
Carries me away

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (02-13-2002 06:14 PM).]

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

1 posted 2002-02-13 06:32 PM

O rosepetals25, how you inspire me!

Your whisper is breath
I deeply inhale in me
as you kiss me, free.

((hugs))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-02-13 06:34 PM

rosepetals25~

So soft and so romantic.....this has a magic about it....H U G S
Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (02-13-2002 06:34 PM).]

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

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3 posted 2002-02-13 06:36 PM

Silver - That is the biggest compliment anyone could ever give me.. Thank you

Lauren - Thank you

I'm always glad to see you stop in

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-13 07:01 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful words always make me sigh! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

5 posted 2002-02-13 07:16 PM

Yeah, yeah, mush, mush. LOL

Can ya tell I like this, Tara? It's quite beautiful, my friend. *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

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