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Canuckster
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0 posted 2002-02-13 05:31 PM



Did you hear ……

Prattling tongues have often wagged and spread this
type of sordid thing.  Their speculation
rife with innuendo.  That fleeting kiss
observed in haste, a vile inculcation

burned into the corp’rate grid, repeated
freely for all within ear’s range.  Story
multiplied and amplified and heated
to a frenzied pitch.  A stolen glory

conferred upon repeating lips which smile
and knowing nods confirm with evident
delight, two reputations now servile
to gossip’s grand design, two lives now rent.

Affection shown between platonic friends
now twisted beyond reach by rumor’s bends.

©  Bart Breen 2001

never try to teach a pig to sing
it wastes your time AND annoys the pig

© Copyright 2002 Bart Breen - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-02-13 05:38 PM


Plenty of that going around, unfortunately
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2 posted 2002-02-13 06:31 PM


Oh yes, I did hear, and this was nice. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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3 posted 2002-02-13 07:22 PM


Mannnnn have i heard this once or twice or thrice before.....*s*

The Liar's club meets the Rumor-Mill
and definitely NOT for the faint-of-heart, huh?

Well done, Bart! Yup!

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4 posted 2002-02-13 07:59 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Bart, I know just how you feel, it too always saddens me to see rumors go around like this only to givge others the wrong impression of someone else and bring much pain and blame to others! (sad sigh) So sad but powerfully expressed, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-02-13 08:03 PM


Bart, this was well done. It really was, I think I will go and read again.

~~Jeff~~

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6 posted 2002-02-13 08:29 PM



I read this once for the structure, a second time for the rhyme, a third time for the sonnet, and a fourth time, for the reason...

well done Sir!

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7 posted 2002-02-13 09:02 PM


A sad state of affairs, turned into a great poem, Bart.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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