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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-02-13 03:55 PM


What I really want for Valentine's day

Hey! I just want to play!
Your way!
You tell me what to do
And off I go, just for you.

I'll take you to the movies
Dance the night away
Or sit and chord on my guitar
A new song as I play.

It matters not; the day is yours
And I'm your any order
I'll touch and feel or
Cook you veal, or carry bags, your porter.

I'll make your bed, bleed blood of red
Take you dancing; make love, romancing
Fly you past Mars, beyond the stars
Or listen to your breeze, caressing your knees.

Just ask me and I'll do it, hop to it
Anything at all; big or small, for you
That's the only thing, I really want
On Valentine's day, it's true. Just to Please You.

That's what I really want for Valentine's day

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
February 13, 2002

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1slick_lady
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1 posted 2002-02-13 03:57 PM


thank you dear...ill take 2 of every thing...giggle...helen
Silver Streak
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2 posted 2002-02-13 04:01 PM


My pleasure, helen. Just two?
((helen))
-newell

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with you
3 posted 2002-02-13 04:01 PM


sigh, me too... LOL

you know how to make the ladies say
yes please!
this is wonderfully sweet

Silver Streak
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4 posted 2002-02-13 04:05 PM


Ah! the ladies, here, are wonderfully sweet!
Especially you.

((SEA))
-newell

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Kethry
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5 posted 2002-02-13 04:10 PM


SS,
does that mean you would be my love slave?
Keth.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Silver Streak
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6 posted 2002-02-13 04:13 PM


Whatever you ask, darling Kethry. Whatever you ask.
((Kethry))
-newelll

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7 posted 2002-02-13 04:50 PM




(sigh) Oooohhhhhh...I just know your love will always treasure this, this is gorgeous! (big hugggsssssss) May you have the happiest Valentines Day with your sweetheart, sweet friend, we all love you so much!



Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-02-13 04:56 PM


be honest, you know what you really want this valentines day is ME! LOL
I'm such a kidder! I would love some chocolate covered cherries though. yum yum

Madame Chipmunk
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9 posted 2002-02-13 04:58 PM


Thanks for asking, Newell......I'll take some health, happiness, a fast metabolism and naturally curly hair.
Thanks for posting this!

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10 posted 2002-02-13 05:00 PM


SOOOO what time are ya picking me up???  

This sounds so lovely and so romantic...very nice Silver Streak....


Lauren~


Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

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Silver Streak
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11 posted 2002-02-13 05:08 PM


Thank you, sweet Noah for your loving thoughs.
((Noah))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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12 posted 2002-02-13 05:09 PM


Joanna, some chocolate covered cherries are yours, my dear.
((Joanna))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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13 posted 2002-02-13 05:11 PM


Madame, as you wish, dear. Your smallest wish is my greatest command.
((Madame Chipmunk))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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14 posted 2002-02-13 05:13 PM


Look at the stars, tonight. Lauren. They will tell you when to be ready.

((Lauren))
-newell

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15 posted 2002-02-13 06:35 PM


Oh very nice Newell. I do hope you get what you want. Happy Valentines day, floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
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16 posted 2002-02-13 06:38 PM


floria, I want you to have what you want. What do you want?

((floria))
-newell

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17 posted 2002-02-13 10:33 PM


Nice write, Newell. Happy Valentines Day.
Sandra

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18 posted 2002-02-13 10:55 PM


Newell darling boy this is utterly utterly wonderful I love it

I’ve told you my love what I want today
Nothing much except to hear you say
Those little words that mean so very much
A heart that is open to loves’ touch
A smile that warms me from the inside out
And words I can trust without a doubt
That’s what I want on this our lovers day
Just a lover true who’ll want to stay

You did say absolutely anything darling Newell….

This is utterly wonderful I love it I really do

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79


Silver Streak
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19 posted 2002-02-13 11:41 PM


Thank you Sandra. And I wish you a very wonderful Valentines day, as well.
((Sandra))
-newell

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20 posted 2002-02-13 11:43 PM


Sweetly and thoughtfully said.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Silver Streak
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21 posted 2002-02-13 11:52 PM


Marsha, darling girl.

You say:

I’ve told you my love what I want today
Nothing much except to hear you say
Those little words that mean so very much
A heart that is open to loves’ touch
A smile that warms me from the inside out
And words I can trust without a doubt
That’s what I want on this our lovers day
Just a lover true who’ll want to stay

My answer is:

Yes, I heard your sweetest words today
And all the listening world now hears my say
I love you, take me in your open heart, I crave
I'll smile for you forever to my grave.

My actions, and my words are in concrete
I love you from you hair down to your feet
So starting now, on this new lover's day
I'll stay with you, a lover true, your way.

I love you, Mushy
((Marsha))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher


[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-13-2002 11:54 PM).]

Silver Streak
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22 posted 2002-02-14 12:06 PM


Thank you, Siofra.
((Siofra))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Duncan
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23 posted 2002-02-14 01:02 AM


Hey! I just want to play!

Sounds like a great day.  Everybody meeting on the playground?

Startime
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24 posted 2002-02-14 01:08 AM


*giggling* I want some too...*sigh* imagine a man who wants to please....You are a true romantic, dear man...I love it. **big big hugs** HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Silver Streak
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25 posted 2002-02-14 06:52 AM


Hi Duncan. I'm sure you are welcome just as long as you always play her way.
((Duncan))
-newell

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Silver Streak
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26 posted 2002-02-14 06:55 AM


Hi Duncan. I'm sure you are welcome just as long as you always play her way.
((Duncan))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

[This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-14-2002 07:00 AM).]

Silver Streak
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27 posted 2002-02-14 06:58 AM


O Karen! I'm sooooooooo glad you came. As you are sooooooo special! Just name it, dear. What would you like for Valentine's day? Would you like your own galaxy of stars?
((Karen))
-newell

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Dee
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28 posted 2002-02-14 07:01 PM


SS, wow! A man who aims to please. This I like to see. What are you like at back rubs?

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

Silver Streak
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29 posted 2002-02-14 07:22 PM


O! Dee! My back rubs are wonderful. Would you like to try one?  And I also sing country music.
((Dee))

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