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srsmith25
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since 2002-02-07
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Indiana

0 posted 2002-02-13 02:36 PM




AT WAR WITH MY HAIR

I'm only in my late 20's
And something bothers me so.
I'm constantly pulling out my hair –
What strange behavior – I know.

There is a reason behind this
And it's not what you may think.
I do not have a disorder
And I don't take drugs or drink.

The hairs that I pull out
Are different than others in my head.
They are a different color,
But not blonde or black or red.

When I go to beauticians,
As they cut my hair they say,
"I hate to say this, but did you
know you have hairs of gray?"

At the young age of seventeen
I saw the first gray hair appear.
I have dyed my hair many times.
The gray hairs just multiply each year.

I've pulled and pulled and pulled,
But more gray hairs I always see.
Maybe I should just accept it,
And let those gray hairs be.


Stacy Smith
http://26ssmith.tripod.com/eyesofwild/

© Copyright 2002 Stacy Smith - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-02-13 02:36 PM



My kind of writer!  Straight and to the point!  Leave those gray hairs be!  Welcome to Passions!  Please check your E-mail for a special Greeting!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

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RosePetal
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2 posted 2002-02-13 02:39 PM


Welcome to poetry land! I'll bet you still look good with those gray hairs!

I hope you enjoy it around here!

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (02-13-2002 02:40 PM).]

srsmith25
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since 2002-02-07
Posts 22
Indiana
3 posted 2002-02-13 02:50 PM


Thanks for the welcome guys. Sunshine: thanks also for the greeting. That was neat. I appreciate it.
Duncan
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4 posted 2002-02-13 02:57 PM


Thanks for the laugh...and welcome to PIP!
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2002-02-13 03:24 PM


Cute, and hey, I gotta love the gray hair--I think of it as a kind of badge for survivors! Besides, it's a great gothic look!
Thanks for the smile, and welcome to Passions!

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2002-02-13 04:01 PM


hey, great, another new member.... I loved the poem.... i had to laugh... at age 36 I am having the same problem... to colour or not to colour... that is the question.... and I am sooo glad that you had the inspiration to write about it.  Bravo!!

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-02-13 07:52 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
Very Cute First Post!
I shall be looking forward to seeing more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love transcends time and space~

JBaker515
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8 posted 2002-02-13 07:54 PM


This was very cute!

I loved every word!@

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!

~~Jeff~~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2002-02-13 07:59 PM


LOL, I can just see you trying to pull out those greys. Leave'em be...would you rather be bald? No, I didn't think so. What a humorous first post. Welcome to these blue pages, which are covered with grey haired poetic postings.
Poet deVine
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10 posted 2002-02-13 08:19 PM


Welcome to our humble abode. Gray hairs are optional (kids give them to you so watch out!). I enjoyed your poem and look forward to reading more from you.
Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2002-02-13 08:28 PM




YAY!!! (giggles in delight) All hail the gray hairs, let them be!!! (smiles) This is such a delightful and cute first post, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Stacy, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

brianbeaudry
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since 2001-07-20
Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada
12 posted 2002-02-13 08:35 PM


Wonderful first post Stacy....Good to see you here, by the way, I got the book, it is magnificient!!!(Not because some of mine are in it LOL) You did a fabulous job of editing it dear friend!!!About the grey hair,I too started at the age of 18, told myself it was wisdom showing through at a tender age...whether it's true or not I don't know..made me feel better though!!! email me if you get the chance, I have a few questions about the publisher.

[This message has been edited by brianbeaudry (02-13-2002 08:36 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
13 posted 2002-02-13 08:38 PM


Welcome to Passions, Stacey...
I think you should let it grow in grey.
Grey hair with a young face often looks very attractive....just ask Stevie (Sodpossum)  He's only 32 and he has more grey hair than his Mama (North Carolina Girl)Juanita

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Morcastlin
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since 2002-01-14
Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA
14 posted 2002-02-13 09:39 PM


Welcome to PIP! This group is great! I enjoyed your poem, it was honest and humorous! Well done!

Love,
Bonnie

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
15 posted 2002-02-13 09:48 PM


Great first post and welcome!!!

I spotted my first grey hair while looking in the rear view mirror of my car.  I was so perplexed at the thought, I had to stare at it and almost drove into the ditch!!


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