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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-02-13 02:14 PM


candelight caress
passion's dance is evolving
begun with a kiss
~*~
desires are aflame
eyes limpid pools in the heat
I would drown in them
~*~
welcome bindery
bound by passion's hot demands
by choice we unite
~*~
lost to the moment
passion is love's explosion
one, yet two in love



Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (02-14-2002 09:26 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-02-13 02:21 PM


Ooooooo! Interloper. You steal my heart.

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2002-02-13 02:21 PM


Interloper,

    Oh how I love your writing It is always a treat to read your Senryus and Tankas and Haikus.  Thank you for sharing.. I loveeeeee them

Happy Valentine's Day

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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3 posted 2002-02-13 02:27 PM


oh yes...can't get enough of that loving feeling you do these sooo wonderfully
Startime
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4 posted 2002-02-13 02:34 PM


passions to release
started by a single kiss
building with desire

*sigh* the passion of your words always leads me to Love's Explosion....**big hugs** HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY
*giggling* you are certainly no phantom...there is too much heat in you to ever think you were just the shadow of a dream.  


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (02-13-2002 02:40 PM).]

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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-02-13 02:35 PM



With the title you offered, one could come in to read this expecting just about anything and yet...

you delved deep to caress true meaning with this one, Sir.

Very well done, indeed!

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6 posted 2002-02-13 02:42 PM


Perfect Valetine Poem
Sandra

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7 posted 2002-02-13 03:11 PM


passion explodes bright
lustrous in french silk rhythm
melting a sweetheart



Ooohhhhhhh...this is sooooooo breathtaking, sweet friend, we all wish you the happiest and loveliest Valentines Day from the bottom of our hearts, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Interloper, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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with you
8 posted 2002-02-13 03:18 PM


love these!! you do romance beautifully
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