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BtwnRockandHardPlace
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 98
NJ, USA
0 posted 2002-02-13 11:32 AM

The hardest part
of being with you
is having to say goodbye
when we're together, darlin'
time just seems to fly

as you hold me
in your arms
you hypnotize me
with your charms

there is nowhere else
I'd rather be
Than here with you,
while you're
deeply kissing me

passionate longing
is what I feel
as I await the next moment
you hold me closely
and whisper in my ear

to feel your warmth...
your body next to mine
to know I'm loved by you
means more to me
than mere words can say

to my lover and
dearest friend
all my love and
Happy Valentine's Day!!

[This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (02-13-2002 11:33 AM).]
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sodpossom
Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723
N.C
1 posted 2002-02-13 11:33 AM

Very sweet and romantic!
Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2002-02-13 12:01 PM

I like this one. Romantic, just right for Valentines.

Nan
strbbux
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since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859
3 posted 2002-02-13 12:02 PM

Sooooo nice and sweet and romantic. nice write. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)
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