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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-02-13 08:07 AM


Stop

I cry about the waste of earth
And care not for your place of birth.
Nor do I care your color skin
For I know mine is just as thin.

Its time to stop the greed of man
I know there is a better plan.
I also know we’re not same
But that cannot be made to blame.

Apocalypse rides rampant power
There is no need of babbles tower.
Each man can do his very own
Within a temperate and happy zone

The pay will be an ample life
And with the minimum of strife
Man should look upon each other
As a sister and a brother.

We all posses a little Kane
A microscopic part of vein
It lives as part of every goal
It is a part of every soul.

We either face the simple truth
Or change will change the world forsooth.


© Copyright 2002 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-02-13 08:40 AM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Seymour, I couldn't agree with you more, my heart cries out to all the hatred among mankind in the world, and I wish we could all make peace to one another and treat each other like siblings in Gods arms! (big hugggssssss) So heartaching but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-13 08:58 AM



Amid the chaos and the din
comes a feeling of sacred kin
here among the pages blue
I search for all the words of You

for if there were a sagacious teach
that keeps me from the hoary breach
where black is blacker all the while
I find my peace within your smile

for all that you would pen, my friend,
is fraught of all sincere,
so heed my thanks for yet this bend
that I would hold so dear


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-02-13 09:00 AM


Noah,
Thank you for the read and wonderful comment.

doreen peri
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4 posted 2002-02-13 09:01 AM


this is so true, Sy, and so well stated .... even though we have that little bit of Kane in us, we are Abel to overcome by reaching out with love and compassion to each other.

nice job!

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-02-13 09:03 AM


Dear Sunshine,
I thank you for the wonderful poetic response. You brighten the gray of my day.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-02-13 09:05 AM


Doreen,
You don' favor me with your comments to often but when you do you make me smile.

hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2002-02-13 09:16 AM


....simply bows to the master of rhyme
No need for words on this one Seymore

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html  

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-02-13 09:18 AM


Hoot,

Dulcinea
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9 posted 2002-02-13 10:09 AM


If only...~~sigh~~ Well said Seymour, and powerfully provoking thoughts penned magnificiently here.
SpitFire
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10 posted 2002-02-13 10:10 AM


~I share in your concern,...this is touching. *Peace.
marya2
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11 posted 2002-02-13 11:13 AM


this is my first comment, been reading like forever, boy did I get scared, I got to the screen you know, to reply?  and I look up and see the word STOP ......ROFL
anyway, I like this....but you scared me

marya

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12 posted 2002-02-13 12:04 PM


enjoy
strbbux
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13 posted 2002-02-13 12:07 PM


Seymour I love this, so much truth, with just a little bit of work from each one of us the rewards would be remarkable. Nice write, floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2002-02-13 12:35 PM


Dulcinea,
Yes if only, thank you.

SpitFire,
Thank you dear.

Marya,
LOL didn't mean to scare you, Thanks for the read and comment.

Vandana,
Thank you.

Floria,
Yes, thank you,

Janet Marie
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15 posted 2002-02-13 04:28 PM


I cry about the waste of earth
And care not for your place of birth.
Nor do I care your color skin
For I know mine is just as thin.

=====================================

The pay will be an ample life
And with the minimum of strife
Man should look upon each other
As a sister and a brother.

We all posses a little Kane
A microscopic part of vein

It lives as part of every goal
It is a part of every soul.
======================================


OH but I do so love the skin youre in *L*

sorry Im late me Stinkylove...
I been setting up the new puter
thank you for the view thru wise eyes
mans crimes told in rhymes ... Mother Nature loves poets the most ya know.  LOL
Me too

Some find subtlety in strangers,
some find subtlety in alone.
Your eyes, you see everything,
my eyes, I see it all together now ... and I know.

Tennessee Angel
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16 posted 2002-02-13 04:53 PM


I love this!  Truer words have not been spoken.  
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We all possess a little Kane
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Indeed we do.  Lovely write!

Madame Chipmunk
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17 posted 2002-02-13 05:03 PM




Very nice job on this one, Sy...

Man should look upon each other
As a sister and a brother.

We all posses a little Kane
A microscopic part of vein
It lives as part of every goal
It is a part of every soul.

Well said!

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2002-02-13 09:42 PM


JM,
Glad you got your new puter. And hope you didn't have any trouble setting it up.
Thanks for the sweet answer.
WW R S

Tennessee Angel,
Glad you enjoyed, thank you.

Madame C,
Thank you

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