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brianbeaudry
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0 posted 2002-02-12 10:14 PM


Miner’s Life

Walking through this mining town once prosperous and grand
In tribute to golden years the head-frames there still stand
All of them are tall of stature, all similar of design
Portals to the underworld, where men once stood in line

It was not a life of ease for those who toiled below
For to their tortured bodies, much harm did it bestow
It troubled them in later years with lungs that turned to stone
And bent backs and crippled limbs from mangled broken bone

Each day they would descend much like entering a tomb
Working in an environment where danger ever loomed
Blasting and digging holes in mother earth’s entrails
Breathing in of rock and smoke and air that’s very stale

Their fingers white and numb from the vibrations of the drill
Breaking rock and moving stone with the power of sheer will
Wet and damp and very cold, they worked around the clock
To make investors happy and increase values of the stock

Many times a cave-in would rob a miner of his life
Leaving behind young children and many a grieving wife
But the miners would all join force to dig free the stope
Until the rock was dug away they still hung on to hope

My father was such a man, he worked in many mines
On his face hard life and pain had written many lines
His body hard as steel and his arms were like twin oaks
The earth would seem to tremble each time that he spoke

He made it through a lifetime of working in a hole
Miserable and dirty, it could bend a strong man’s soul
At heart he was a man of love, of kind and gentle measure
In this mind and soul, his memories my greatest treasure

I love and miss you Dad

© Copyright 2002 Brian Beaudry - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-12 10:22 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Brian, this is sooooooooo both sad and beautiful, my heart cries out to all those miners lives who are lost by lung cancer of the mines and losing time from their families, but I am also so happy your father is a survivor of it all and so happy to see you always! (big hugggssssss) This one had me flooding with tears, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much, this is such a heartwarming tribute! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-02-12 10:37 PM


Your father would've been very proud to see what a wonderful tribute you just gave to him.  A friend of mine also had a father that worked in these dark, cold and damp holes.  The coal dust finally took his life and left my friend and orphan, to be raised by his grandmother.  I much appreciate not only your post on my poem, but you posting this so that I could read about a great man and father.

Michael

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3 posted 2002-02-15 05:29 PM


Hello Brian

So descriptive were your words and how vividly I could imagine how it must have been down there in the mine.  We have many old disused mines here in the state of Victoria where I live, one particular place they have made a tourist attraction - called Sovereign Hill.  Such an interesting place to visit and we actually toured down one of the mines and it literally sent shivers down my spine as I heard what those men went through.  This was a wonderful dedication to your father and I know for a fact that you've done him proud.

Take care.......Sue

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4 posted 2002-02-15 09:12 PM


Very nice tribute Brian. I read it twice. I sent you an e-mail, but haven't heard back from you. I hope you got it. If you would like to e-mail me, my e-mail is: srsmith25@yahoo.com.

Stacy Smith

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